From: Grahame Wheeler [wheels99@bigpond.net.au]
Sent: Sunday, 20 May 2007 12:17 PM
To: Terry Fogarty
Subject: Re: Proof read letter to AAT

Attachments: To AAT.doc

Terry it looks good and will get some attention.

I just made a couple of suggestions highlighted in red and in brackets for alternatives to what you have written.

I have also highlighted in red, words I felt were perhaps un-necessary.

It is purely personal choice and up to you mate.

Thank you for sending it to me. The letter made sense and read well.

cheers G..

----- Original Message -----

From: Terry Fogarty

To: Grahame wheeler

Sent: Sunday, May 20, 2007 10:39 AM

Subject: Proof read letter to AAT

Grahame,

I’ll print this together with copies of relevant correspondence and documents and post it later today.

If you’re home I’d appreciate it if you could proof read it for me to see that I haven’t made any whoppers.

I’ve deliberately kept it short.

I’ll do a similar one to the VRB.

Thanks.

Terry Fogarty

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Australia

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